1.   Are you proud of your essay?  Is it your best work?  Why?  Or, what’s the problem?  Why can’t your work get done?

2.  Groups and editing.

1.  Circle any mistakes you think you see.

2.  Is MLA correct?  Why not?

3.  Does the story make sense?

4.  Is the story on topic?  Victim/Creator?

5.  Are there enough paragraphs?

6.  Are there too many paragraphs?

7.  What would you add to the story?

8.  What would you change?

9.  Offer a compliment.

3. HW!  Please complete your essay for submission on Friday.